There aren't many stories that make me think about them for a few days, but this one was it. This, in specific, played with my mind and emotions to the point it make me come back to it to think.
Keep up the great work, I would love to see more of this.
I was going to stay away from D, but then I saw that you put Lorenzo Zurzolo as his 'aesthetic' and I was hooked. Well done, you've pulled me down the 'bad idea' angsty path.
Holy ****... I am INVESTED!!! The game relate to me sooo much! The detail in everything is just so PERFECT!!! I mean wow... even the detail in the drink? The different flavor for Red Bull??? I NEED MORE!!!
Oh damn I went into this so sure I'd be friends with everyone and romancing my childhood friend but why is my roommate so babygirl, my academic rival so fun to tease, and my RA so enchanting 😭😭😭 i don't think i can manslut, malewife, manipulate my way outta this
Hi, I love this story so much! Just want to know is there only one chapter - if not how do I continue to chapter 2? (after C leaves you on the dance floor)
just want to gushed over how much i love the new chapter especially mc interaction with ro are splendid and making me giddy, i juat love the way you write the dialogue for mc and c rivalry it feel so genuine? Like it just feel like two smart rich people bickering over the smartness. Want to leave like a comment on your post about the ro future career that's on tumblr but couldn't cause my account can't give comment, like it's so annoying
This is so amazing. It feels really modern, it was really fun seeing these brain rot terms, I love it! Story is 😘. And oh, I like how Cedric is acting towards us deep down. Anyway, so excited for the next update, keep up the amazing work!!
Your use of brainrot is so skibidi alpha rizz... Your writing is a level ten gyatt in ohio (I'm so sorry 😭 The minute I read the brainrot from the father I had to say something)
Hey will there be an option to add middle name(s) to mc's full name? It just seems kinda odd for them to not have one while all the other characters in the story do. (Don't get me wrong the game is terrific :) I'm enjoying it so much)
The part where they listen to the downtown lights, i played the song in the background as i was reading and it changed everything, it is so good 🥹 i cried a little imagining the scene of the parents dancing together to the song. Your writing is so good i can't wait for moreeee
DEAR GOD I've never seen an IF that resonated with me as quickly as this one did, AND THEN I FIND OUT IT'S JUST THE PROLOGUE AHHHHHH Please for the sake of my soul continue writing this, I NEEED ITTTT
Basing him off of the God Dionysus. So yeah he's a cunty girly pop man whore but he's also a god of chaos, revelry, dead and rebirth, and madness. Fearing him is right. He is Mansplain, manipulate, man whore, male wife.
i legit teared up playing the song in the background while reading (: so well written and descriptive without literally describing every little thing.. I love it!
Hey, i wanted to asked you a question on why Elias said 'no wonder your my son' when my character gender is female? I hope that I wasn't bothering by asking this question
i think you might've missed the option to cycle throught the (son/daughter/child) options in the first page of chapter one. the word is highlighted and that should solve it!
I absolutely love how detailed and fancy your writing is! I'm really looking forward to meeting the ROs, also about the part where we pick if we have an ex or not.. is it possible for mc to not have a previous relationship while still being romantically and sexually attracted to the ROs? In shorter words.. not Aroace but hasn't had a past relationship?
THIS IS SO GOOD! I love the relationship between the mc and their father🥹 and the aesthetic options, hobbies and other things🫶 can't wait for more! (I'm also adding that song to my playlist that is so good)
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Pues estaré esperando el nuevo capítulo con ganas... Por favor, seguid haciéndolo que vale mucho la pena. Gracias, un saludo desde España:)
Holaaa, que tal? Me encanto este libro!!! Para cuando mas capitulos? Porfaa, que tengo mucha intriga!!! Gracias:)
¡qué alegría saber que te gusta la historia hasta ahora! estoy escribiendo el próximo capítulo en este momento y será publicado a principios de 2025.
sorry but i am curious what is the name of the song that's playing when you start the game
amber waves by ethel cain
thank you!
There aren't many stories that make me think about them for a few days, but this one was it. This, in specific, played with my mind and emotions to the point it make me come back to it to think.
Keep up the great work, I would love to see more of this.
this wip is so skibidi gyatt sigma rizz
(i think i died a little inside while typing that)
Wow.. great demo so far, can't wait for more.
I was going to stay away from D, but then I saw that you put Lorenzo Zurzolo as his 'aesthetic' and I was hooked. Well done, you've pulled me down the 'bad idea' angsty path.
Holy ****... I am INVESTED!!! The game relate to me sooo much! The detail in everything is just so PERFECT!!! I mean wow... even the detail in the drink? The different flavor for Red Bull??? I NEED MORE!!!
Need. More. Im obsessed.
THIS IS SO GOOD WHAAATTTTT
Oh damn I went into this so sure I'd be friends with everyone and romancing my childhood friend but why is my roommate so babygirl, my academic rival so fun to tease, and my RA so enchanting 😭😭😭 i don't think i can manslut, malewife, manipulate my way outta this
REAL HAAHHAHAHA
twas a great idea to hide the childhood friend from us for now, gets us invested in the others
That's a galaxy brain move right there
Hi, I love this story so much! Just want to know is there only one chapter - if not how do I continue to chapter 2? (after C leaves you on the dance floor)
that should be the end of chapter 3 actually!
HELPP I KEEP GETTING STUCK AFTER M GETS WHISKED AWAY AT THE CLUB FAIR 😭😭 the game refuses to get going its just stuck at "toward-' is this a bug? ☹☹
it's probably because you're playing with a save. many variables have been added/changed so you should start a new game!
Wheres the go to the police option for when you meet Vanessa (i chose female). "You just tried to murder me, but water under the bridge."
there is none, let’s just say M made sure of that lmao (also for plot reasons).
hey so this is actually great :) adore your writing style!
just want to gushed over how much i love the new chapter especially mc interaction with ro are splendid and making me giddy, i juat love the way you write the dialogue for mc and c rivalry it feel so genuine? Like it just feel like two smart rich people bickering over the smartness. Want to leave like a comment on your post about the ro future career that's on tumblr but couldn't cause my account can't give comment, like it's so annoying
Hey ! I really like your story ! I was here for W but I stayed C haha
I just wanted to say that when I choose 'Non binary', C and the father call the MC 'son' (even if I use they/them), is it normal ?
you might’ve missed the option to choose that term in the first page of chapter one. you should be able to cycle through the highlighted term there.
I might just be a smidge obsessed with C's character. Their dynamic with the MC is just *chef's kiss*.
can't apply for the major i want IRL so this will have to do 😋
I love this game so far! Can't wait for the rest of this blessed game to come out! However, does anyone know where W is?
you'll need to go to the party with D to find them. they’re the blonde in a RE4 costume.
i love you
This is so amazing. It feels really modern, it was really fun seeing these brain rot terms, I love it! Story is 😘. And oh, I like how Cedric is acting towards us deep down. Anyway, so excited for the next update, keep up the amazing work!!
It would be great if the MC refrained from making dumbass jokes without the player's input.
they were raised by elias, what did you expect 😞
I loved the impromptu dumbass jokes, dear author, ignore the haters!
Haters gonna hate
Ugghhh how is the writing so ggoooooodddd 😭I want more already! Thank you for feeding us well with 2 whole chapters!
Your use of brainrot is so skibidi alpha rizz... Your writing is a level ten gyatt in ohio (I'm so sorry 😭 The minute I read the brainrot from the father I had to say something)
I snorted, level ten gyatt in ohio indeed.
Hey will there be an option to add middle name(s) to mc's full name? It just seems kinda odd for them to not have one while all the other characters in the story do. (Don't get me wrong the game is terrific :) I'm enjoying it so much)
oh yeah, definitely. the option will show up on chapter two.
The part where they listen to the downtown lights, i played the song in the background as i was reading and it changed everything, it is so good 🥹 i cried a little imagining the scene of the parents dancing together to the song. Your writing is so good i can't wait for moreeee
did u learn brainrot terms just for this or do you have prolonged exposure like i do? either way the whole thing's very sigma alpha.
as a chronically online gen z kid, it was inevitable 😔
DEAR GOD I've never seen an IF that resonated with me as quickly as this one did, AND THEN I FIND OUT IT'S JUST THE PROLOGUE AHHHHHH
Please for the sake of my soul continue writing this, I NEEED ITTTT
the next update includes chapter two and three 🤭 it'll be released around the last week of october or early november 🫡
You are a saint, thank you for this blessing
omg so excited this was such an amazing read
Really excited!!!
The manor staff fears him.
The him in question about to be the most girly pop, man whore of this generation
comment of the month right here 😭
Basing him off of the God Dionysus. So yeah he's a cunty girly pop man whore but he's also a god of chaos, revelry, dead and rebirth, and madness. Fearing him is right. He is Mansplain, manipulate, man whore, male wife.
this. this is it. my all time favourite IF.
i can feel it in my bones.
i legit teared up playing the song in the background while reading (: so well written and descriptive without literally describing every little thing.. I love it!
Hey, i wanted to asked you a question on why Elias said 'no wonder your my son' when my character gender is female? I hope that I wasn't bothering by asking this question
i think you might've missed the option to cycle throught the (son/daughter/child) options in the first page of chapter one. the word is highlighted and that should solve it!
Oh thanks you, perhaps i did forget to do that. Also, I just want to say that i love your writings is so descriptive and poetic
I love this so far; I was genuinely disappointed when “Chapter 1” wasn’t a continue button.
When the question about the ex comes up, does that gender selection lock in the ROs? Or will characters be gender selectable when we first meet them?
Also, will you please add a truly dark theme? While Nox has a black background, the bright pink header and menu is still super bright.
nope! you'll be able to choose the ROs gender as they come up 🤝 as for the themes, my coder and i will brainstorm for it to be less brighter.
This is 🔥🔥 so happy I stumbled upon this
This has so much potential, so excited for your next update this is amazing 😍😍
I absolutely love how detailed and fancy your writing is! I'm really looking forward to meeting the ROs, also about the part where we pick if we have an ex or not.. is it possible for mc to not have a previous relationship while still being romantically and sexually attracted to the ROs? In shorter words.. not Aroace but hasn't had a past relationship?
THIS IS SO GOOD! I love the relationship between the mc and their father🥹 and the aesthetic options, hobbies and other things🫶 can't wait for more! (I'm also adding that song to my playlist that is so good)
btw, is there a reason as to why we can't rate this as of yet?
i actually wanted to have a particular length out before that! preferably till chapter three.
no no it makes sense, let a dumbass know if one can support you in any other ways
you can follow me on either tumblr or itch.io! i'm just going off fully off of the readers' enthusiasm and my creative juices atp 🫶🏻
Enjoyed what yoy have so far, can't wait for more!