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I've rarely been so pissed that a story stopped :')), well follow this to the end

gnawing at the bars of my enclosure, eagerly awaiting the next chapter >:)

IM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS OMG

I love it so far but since I'm playing a cis female, there's many times where the game refers to my MC as son/boy instead -w-

i think you might've missed the option to cycle throught the (son/daughter/child) options in the first page of chapter one. the word is highlighted and that should solve it!

so many good things popping up

As Neko-Gore said, all the buttons are invisible and as such the game has been rendered unplayable for me. I need to access the settings menu to adjust things, like dark mode, but am entirely unable to and as such I simply must abandon this game. Please fix this.

no worries, looks like it's something that has corrupted the raw html we have as well. we'll get to fixing that by tomorrow

Oh no! Thats so weird, glad its fixable then.

it’s fixed now! we just have to centre the toggle a bit but we’ll do it collectively with the next update

So the arrows that let you go back/forward , and the one that bring you to the "home page" are invisible, also the option to change the setting, restart, save and full screen are all invisible too for me, I had to hunt them down with my cursor XD

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why does it say status released? shouldn't it say in development or are we only getting one chapter haha so confused.

This is just the demo! You can go to Axel's tumblr ^^ for updates if you really like to know more: 

In his words: 
*the next update will probably be released with both chapter two and three, if i finish the latter before halloween.*

I highly doubt this piece is confined to a single chapter.

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I love this! Love the writing and music.

Solid 10/10 so far <3

This was sooo good! You got W rizz!

cant wait to see more! the story is amazing so far :)

Interesting start!  Looking forward to seeing where the story goes!

This is awesome! The writing style is amazing, and I love the amount of character customization! When Elias started using brainrot language I was definitely caught off guard, in a good way. 

This is so beautifully written. It makes me want to read The Secret History again because of the writing style. 🥺

such a wonderful start, I'm looking forward to read more about the story :D (the song downton lights by the Blue Nile is really great :D )

Love it so far!! Just hope the stepmom isn't evil. Dad deserves the world!!!

Absolutely in love! I screamed when I saw "Chapter End".  I've been looking forward to this project since I first saw the post on Tumblr. Elias is a treasure and I would kill/die for him. I'm curious about how the customization of the character is going to further our interactions with our ROs & other characters.  I love that we were given so many choices from the very beginning. I can't wait for the next update!! This was fantastic. Love your writing! 

Really love the first chapter: how it was written and the atmosphere! Thanks for making me discover to The Downtown Lights by The Blue Nile, it's a really nice song!

Anyways, can't wait to read what's to come and to meet the ROs!

This was really good! Very eager now to read more and meet the ROs!!

Congratulations on the release!! I absolutely love the customization system and the aesthetics! Can't wait for more!

Please the dad is so sweet i cried?? 😭😭

Omg this was so worth reading even if it just is for the song. It's such a great song I'm still listening to it even after reading the chapter. I absolutely adore MCs dad and he just deserves the world! 😭❤️

what’s the name of the song? I can’t find it😭

amber waves by ethel cain

A promising start. Looking forward for more.

Can't wait to play this masterpiece

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