The part where they listen to the downtown lights, i played the song in the background as i was reading and it changed everything, it is so good 🥹 i cried a little imagining the scene of the parents dancing together to the song. Your writing is so good i can't wait for moreeee
DEAR GOD I've never seen an IF that resonated with me as quickly as this one did, AND THEN I FIND OUT IT'S JUST THE PROLOGUE AHHHHHH Please for the sake of my soul continue writing this, I NEEED ITTTT
Basing him off of the God Dionysus. So yeah he's a cunty girly pop man whore but he's also a god of chaos, revelry, dead and rebirth, and madness. Fearing him is right. He is Mansplain, manipulate, man whore, male wife.
i legit teared up playing the song in the background while reading (: so well written and descriptive without literally describing every little thing.. I love it!
Hey, i wanted to asked you a question on why Elias said 'no wonder your my son' when my character gender is female? I hope that I wasn't bothering by asking this question
i think you might've missed the option to cycle throught the (son/daughter/child) options in the first page of chapter one. the word is highlighted and that should solve it!
I absolutely love how detailed and fancy your writing is! I'm really looking forward to meeting the ROs, also about the part where we pick if we have an ex or not.. is it possible for mc to not have a previous relationship while still being romantically and sexually attracted to the ROs? In shorter words.. not Aroace but hasn't had a past relationship?
THIS IS SO GOOD! I love the relationship between the mc and their father🥹 and the aesthetic options, hobbies and other things🫶 can't wait for more! (I'm also adding that song to my playlist that is so good)
i think you might've missed the option to cycle throught the (son/daughter/child) options in the first page of chapter one. the word is highlighted and that should solve it!
As Neko-Gore said, all the buttons are invisible and as such the game has been rendered unplayable for me. I need to access the settings menu to adjust things, like dark mode, but am entirely unable to and as such I simply must abandon this game. Please fix this.
So the arrows that let you go back/forward , and the one that bring you to the "home page" are invisible, also the option to change the setting, restart, save and full screen are all invisible too for me, I had to hunt them down with my cursor XD
This is awesome! The writing style is amazing, and I love the amount of character customization! When Elias started using brainrot language I was definitely caught off guard, in a good way.
Absolutely in love! I screamed when I saw "Chapter End". I've been looking forward to this project since I first saw the post on Tumblr. Elias is a treasure and I would kill/die for him. I'm curious about how the customization of the character is going to further our interactions with our ROs & other characters. I love that we were given so many choices from the very beginning. I can't wait for the next update!! This was fantastic. Love your writing!
Really love the first chapter: how it was written and the atmosphere! Thanks for making me discover to The Downtown Lights by The Blue Nile, it's a really nice song!
Anyways, can't wait to read what's to come and to meet the ROs!
Omg this was so worth reading even if it just is for the song. It's such a great song I'm still listening to it even after reading the chapter. I absolutely adore MCs dad and he just deserves the world! 😭❤️
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The part where they listen to the downtown lights, i played the song in the background as i was reading and it changed everything, it is so good 🥹 i cried a little imagining the scene of the parents dancing together to the song. Your writing is so good i can't wait for moreeee
did u learn brainrot terms just for this or do you have prolonged exposure like i do? either way the whole thing's very sigma alpha.
as a chronically online gen z kid, it was inevitable 😔
DEAR GOD I've never seen an IF that resonated with me as quickly as this one did, AND THEN I FIND OUT IT'S JUST THE PROLOGUE AHHHHHH
Please for the sake of my soul continue writing this, I NEEED ITTTT
the next update includes chapter two and three 🤭 it'll be released around the last week of october or early november 🫡
You are a saint, thank you for this blessing
omg so excited this was such an amazing read
Really excited!!!
The manor staff fears him.
The him in question about to be the most girly pop, man whore of this generation
comment of the month right here 😭
Basing him off of the God Dionysus. So yeah he's a cunty girly pop man whore but he's also a god of chaos, revelry, dead and rebirth, and madness. Fearing him is right. He is Mansplain, manipulate, man whore, male wife.
this. this is it. my all time favourite IF.
i can feel it in my bones.
i legit teared up playing the song in the background while reading (: so well written and descriptive without literally describing every little thing.. I love it!
Hey, i wanted to asked you a question on why Elias said 'no wonder your my son' when my character gender is female? I hope that I wasn't bothering by asking this question
i think you might've missed the option to cycle throught the (son/daughter/child) options in the first page of chapter one. the word is highlighted and that should solve it!
Oh thanks you, perhaps i did forget to do that. Also, I just want to say that i love your writings is so descriptive and poetic
I love this so far; I was genuinely disappointed when “Chapter 1” wasn’t a continue button.
When the question about the ex comes up, does that gender selection lock in the ROs? Or will characters be gender selectable when we first meet them?
Also, will you please add a truly dark theme? While Nox has a black background, the bright pink header and menu is still super bright.
nope! you'll be able to choose the ROs gender as they come up 🤝 as for the themes, my coder and i will brainstorm for it to be less brighter.
This is 🔥🔥 so happy I stumbled upon this
This has so much potential, so excited for your next update this is amazing 😍😍
I absolutely love how detailed and fancy your writing is! I'm really looking forward to meeting the ROs, also about the part where we pick if we have an ex or not.. is it possible for mc to not have a previous relationship while still being romantically and sexually attracted to the ROs? In shorter words.. not Aroace but hasn't had a past relationship?
THIS IS SO GOOD! I love the relationship between the mc and their father🥹 and the aesthetic options, hobbies and other things🫶 can't wait for more! (I'm also adding that song to my playlist that is so good)
btw, is there a reason as to why we can't rate this as of yet?
i actually wanted to have a particular length out before that! preferably till chapter three.
no no it makes sense, let a dumbass know if one can support you in any other ways
you can follow me on either tumblr or itch.io! i'm just going off fully off of the readers' enthusiasm and my creative juices atp 🫶🏻
Enjoyed what yoy have so far, can't wait for more!
I've rarely been so pissed that a story stopped :')), well follow this to the end
gnawing at the bars of my enclosure, eagerly awaiting the next chapter >:)
IM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS OMG
I love it so far but since I'm playing a cis female, there's many times where the game refers to my MC as son/boy instead -w-
i think you might've missed the option to cycle throught the (son/daughter/child) options in the first page of chapter one. the word is highlighted and that should solve it!
so many good things popping up
As Neko-Gore said, all the buttons are invisible and as such the game has been rendered unplayable for me. I need to access the settings menu to adjust things, like dark mode, but am entirely unable to and as such I simply must abandon this game. Please fix this.
no worries, looks like it's something that has corrupted the raw html we have as well. we'll get to fixing that by tomorrow
Oh no! Thats so weird, glad its fixable then.
it’s fixed now! we just have to centre the toggle a bit but we’ll do it collectively with the next update
So the arrows that let you go back/forward , and the one that bring you to the "home page" are invisible, also the option to change the setting, restart, save and full screen are all invisible too for me, I had to hunt them down with my cursor XD
why does it say status released? shouldn't it say in development or are we only getting one chapter haha so confused.
This is just the demo! You can go to Axel's tumblr ^^ for updates if you really like to know more:
In his words:
*the next update will probably be released with both chapter two and three, if i finish the latter before halloween.*
I highly doubt this piece is confined to a single chapter.
I love this! Love the writing and music.
Solid 10/10 so far <3
This was sooo good! You got W rizz!
cant wait to see more! the story is amazing so far :)
Interesting start! Looking forward to seeing where the story goes!
This is awesome! The writing style is amazing, and I love the amount of character customization! When Elias started using brainrot language I was definitely caught off guard, in a good way.
This is so beautifully written. It makes me want to read The Secret History again because of the writing style. 🥺
such a wonderful start, I'm looking forward to read more about the story :D (the song downton lights by the Blue Nile is really great :D )
Love it so far!! Just hope the stepmom isn't evil. Dad deserves the world!!!
Absolutely in love! I screamed when I saw "Chapter End". I've been looking forward to this project since I first saw the post on Tumblr. Elias is a treasure and I would kill/die for him. I'm curious about how the customization of the character is going to further our interactions with our ROs & other characters. I love that we were given so many choices from the very beginning. I can't wait for the next update!! This was fantastic. Love your writing!
Really love the first chapter: how it was written and the atmosphere! Thanks for making me discover to The Downtown Lights by The Blue Nile, it's a really nice song!
Anyways, can't wait to read what's to come and to meet the ROs!
This was really good! Very eager now to read more and meet the ROs!!
Congratulations on the release!! I absolutely love the customization system and the aesthetics! Can't wait for more!
Please the dad is so sweet i cried?? 😭😭
Omg this was so worth reading even if it just is for the song. It's such a great song I'm still listening to it even after reading the chapter. I absolutely adore MCs dad and he just deserves the world! 😭❤️
what’s the name of the song? I can’t find it😭
amber waves by ethel cain
A promising start. Looking forward for more.
Can't wait to play this masterpiece