Does this end at Chapter one end? just making sure i missed somewhere to click. on another note: regardless so far so good. i really enjoyed what has been written out thus far. really really good!
I haven't read through this yet but seeing that Evelyn is from Minnesota sent an arrow of cold shock into my heart. Born and raised Minnesotan and no one ever mentions us! Idk I found it funny-
I am positively enraptured! Now out to recommend this to all my friends who happen to love serial-killer movies/documentaries. *Proceeds to break the Follow button out of sheer enthusiasm*
Really found myself completely lost in the story and then stupidly clicking at the end of chapter 1 hoping for more. Very very good writing. Looking forward to more updates.
Absolutely amazing. I often find myself skim-reading these but the words are written so well and dont dwell long on the unessential. Excited to see where this goes.
Not sure if this a spoiler or not but is our character just plain ole crazy or is "magic" or something else involved? Also I been curious to know what happened to our sibling (I have a guess) and our family since the house was quiet and devoid of life apparently.
I also want to leave this here but when I saw the title I had a whole moment where I was saying the whole red riding hood "what big teeth you have...." it has the same vibes to me
what if the twin died and for some reason the mc replaced them and that is why there was a option to choose their name (i think that would be cool asf but i don't really think that makes sense. also if one of them would replace the other, the replaced would clearly be the mc)
I mean honestly I just thought of the "generic" her sister was sent to a asylum or that cliché where the whole family died in a car accident on rainy day.... But to add onto your thoughts, what if the voice is the sister? Our mc clearly had a strong reaction to that one incident so maybe something happened in the future(killing the parents maybe? or someone or something else) which caused our mc to do the deed and this is how they cope and its probably why they are a "vigilante" killing people they deem "bad".
Actually your idea reminds me of the game "Martha is dead" with the whole twin replacing the dead twin thing.
read the demo just now and holy shit. this is so good, are you kiddin’. I can't wait,, im im , the demo is so hair twirling, kicking my feet, giggling inducing. this is great !!!
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Wow this demo was amazingly written. Good job and looking forward to the release of the upcoming chapters
Cant wait for chapter 2 call me mad but I'm in love with the twin :)
Does this end at Chapter one end? just making sure i missed somewhere to click. on another note: regardless so far so good. i really enjoyed what has been written out thus far. really really good!
Yes, Chapter one is the latest chapter out.
Wow I love the concept! No wonder since Hannibal is my favorite series eheh...
I really can't wait for next chapter !
I haven't read through this yet but seeing that Evelyn is from Minnesota sent an arrow of cold shock into my heart. Born and raised Minnesotan and no one ever mentions us! Idk I found it funny-
I absolutely love the beginning, hope to see more. Good luck!
delightful
I am positively enraptured! Now out to recommend this to all my friends who happen to love serial-killer movies/documentaries. *Proceeds to break the Follow button out of sheer enthusiasm*
Went on a Joker arch
Really found myself completely lost in the story and then stupidly clicking at the end of chapter 1 hoping for more. Very very good writing. Looking forward to more updates.
Absolutely amazing. I often find myself skim-reading these but the words are written so well and dont dwell long on the unessential. Excited to see where this goes.
Not sure if this a spoiler or not but is our character just plain ole crazy or is "magic" or something else involved? Also I been curious to know what happened to our sibling (I have a guess) and our family since the house was quiet and devoid of life apparently.
I also want to leave this here but when I saw the title I had a whole moment where I was saying the whole red riding hood "what big teeth you have...." it has the same vibes to me
what if the twin died and for some reason the mc replaced them and that is why there was a option to choose their name (i think that would be cool asf but i don't really think that makes sense. also if one of them would replace the other, the replaced would clearly be the mc)
I mean honestly I just thought of the "generic" her sister was sent to a asylum or that cliché where the whole family died in a car accident on rainy day.... But to add onto your thoughts, what if the voice is the sister? Our mc clearly had a strong reaction to that one incident so maybe something happened in the future(killing the parents maybe? or someone or something else) which caused our mc to do the deed and this is how they cope and its probably why they are a "vigilante" killing people they deem "bad".
Actually your idea reminds me of the game "Martha is dead" with the whole twin replacing the dead twin thing.
read the demo just now and holy shit. this is so good, are you kiddin’. I can't wait,, im im , the demo is so hair twirling, kicking my feet, giggling inducing. this is great !!!
You know, when I saw this I assumed we were going to be hunting the sicko. I was wrong, we ARE the sicko. Sign me up!
this is really good
remines me of the true story of lovely bones
The evil genius in me is simply cackling. Beside themself with glee. This is going to be a fun ride. :)
Can't wait for more!! I was stressing out how to change my character's gender but I was just dumb haha. Love this game !
wow, this is just up my alley!
OMG This was so exciting & just beautifully dark! I cannot wait for moooooore 🖤🔪