This is truly incredible writing and storytelling! I cannot wait for more. As in, quite literally, my body is unable to handle the anticipation. Please help me. ❤️
haven’t even finished the demo yet but i had to comment 😭 elias saying erm what the sigma actually made me choke i deserve reparations for such a traumatic experience
Really like this one - all the parts just Hit with me. It’s compelling, but it’s all fairly common too, a new dish from regularly used ingredients… and I can’t help wondering when the other shoe will drop and that Dark edge will sting….
I adore well-written characters Most, so I have to give flowers for Céline (blwushy baaaybee) and Dumitra (already in love); they’re the ones you think you’ll know, so easy to be stereotypes; yet both Completely exceeded my assumptions of them. Love that. Played through all the routes to see where they’d go, and my fav is Maxine (I do so love a challenge~) But I did wonder - why M doesn’t have a POV scene like the rest? Is it to keep them mysterious?
really love your take on everything, especially the characters! looks like you pondered on them quite a bit 👀
M is certainly going to be a challenge but one our MC is equipped for 😌 M (and W) will get their POV scenes in the next chapter! i wanted to hold them both off in this update since they were both doing some other things at the moment.
Which is only a compliment to you, really~ Rest assured: I don't spend time on things that don't properly intrigue me. I even replayed scenes (which is like - Highest praise from me lol). But it was really fun going through all the options to discover more on these lovely ROs. V, especially, I think, will be one to watch given they had the most - - Interesting intro, by far - but now seem 'normal' and sweet.
Ah - our busy RA, always so busy~ I don't worry on my MC winning M's heart; not after seeing their chemistry (gold); and I feel M doesn't (genuine)laugh and (real)smile for just anyone. (I could write a thesis on their lil impromptu philosophy date....) So looking forward to getting inside college Yoda's head next chap. <3
la historia aún se está escribiendo. he estado muy ocupado con la escuela de derecho, así que el progreso es un poco lento. el nuevo capítulo tendrá más de 100k palabras, así que también será muy largo para compensar la espera!
Los comentarios me confundieron un monton "super short" no es algo que utilizaria para describir la calidad de narracion e increibles personajes que tienes aqui.
usualmente suelo escoger juego más de fantasía pero hay algo en como describes todo que le da un toque mágico incluso al dormitorio. No puedo mentir y realmente amo la historia y lo que sea que estés pensando con ella!
Me encanta!!!
Jajajaja como detalle extra como alguien que sufre de hemorragias en la nariz de manera diaria. Sólo podía leer esta parte entendiendo la frustración del MC.
ah, muchas gracias 😭 mientras escribía la actualización y publicaba dos capítulos a la vez, esperaba que fuera lo suficientemente largo para que todos quedaran satisfechos con su extensión y el contenido.
comentarios como el tuyo son tan agradables de leer porque la gente lo encontró lo suficientemente satisfactorio y me anima a escribir más. muchas gracias por tu apoyo, querido lector!
p.d. espero que los sangrados de nariz no te molesten mucho 😔
There aren't many stories that make me think about them for a few days, but this one was it. This, in specific, played with my mind and emotions to the point it make me come back to it to think.
Keep up the great work, I would love to see more of this.
I was going to stay away from D, but then I saw that you put Lorenzo Zurzolo as his 'aesthetic' and I was hooked. Well done, you've pulled me down the 'bad idea' angsty path.
Holy ****... I am INVESTED!!! The game relate to me sooo much! The detail in everything is just so PERFECT!!! I mean wow... even the detail in the drink? The different flavor for Red Bull??? I NEED MORE!!!
Oh damn I went into this so sure I'd be friends with everyone and romancing my childhood friend but why is my roommate so babygirl, my academic rival so fun to tease, and my RA so enchanting 😭😭😭 i don't think i can manslut, malewife, manipulate my way outta this
Hi, I love this story so much! Just want to know is there only one chapter - if not how do I continue to chapter 2? (after C leaves you on the dance floor)
just want to gushed over how much i love the new chapter especially mc interaction with ro are splendid and making me giddy, i juat love the way you write the dialogue for mc and c rivalry it feel so genuine? Like it just feel like two smart rich people bickering over the smartness. Want to leave like a comment on your post about the ro future career that's on tumblr but couldn't cause my account can't give comment, like it's so annoying
This is so amazing. It feels really modern, it was really fun seeing these brain rot terms, I love it! Story is 😘. And oh, I like how Cedric is acting towards us deep down. Anyway, so excited for the next update, keep up the amazing work!!
Your use of brainrot is so skibidi alpha rizz... Your writing is a level ten gyatt in ohio (I'm so sorry 😭 The minute I read the brainrot from the father I had to say something)
Hey will there be an option to add middle name(s) to mc's full name? It just seems kinda odd for them to not have one while all the other characters in the story do. (Don't get me wrong the game is terrific :) I'm enjoying it so much)
The part where they listen to the downtown lights, i played the song in the background as i was reading and it changed everything, it is so good 🥹 i cried a little imagining the scene of the parents dancing together to the song. Your writing is so good i can't wait for moreeee
DEAR GOD I've never seen an IF that resonated with me as quickly as this one did, AND THEN I FIND OUT IT'S JUST THE PROLOGUE AHHHHHH Please for the sake of my soul continue writing this, I NEEED ITTTT
Basing him off of the God Dionysus. So yeah he's a cunty girly pop man whore but he's also a god of chaos, revelry, dead and rebirth, and madness. Fearing him is right. He is Mansplain, manipulate, man whore, male wife.
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This is truly incredible writing and storytelling! I cannot wait for more. As in, quite literally, my body is unable to handle the anticipation. Please help me. ❤️
Okk, me encantó esté libro
haven’t even finished the demo yet but i had to comment 😭 elias saying erm what the sigma actually made me choke i deserve reparations for such a traumatic experience
Traumatic experience?! that was a totally normal conversation with our parent
Really like this one - all the parts just Hit with me. It’s compelling, but it’s all fairly common too, a new dish from regularly used ingredients… and I can’t help wondering when the other shoe will drop and that Dark edge will sting….
I adore well-written characters Most, so I have to give flowers for Céline (blwushy baaaybee) and Dumitra (already in love); they’re the ones you think you’ll know, so easy to be stereotypes; yet both Completely exceeded my assumptions of them. Love that. Played through all the routes to see where they’d go, and my fav is Maxine (I do so love a challenge~) But I did wonder - why M doesn’t have a POV scene like the rest? Is it to keep them mysterious?
really love your take on everything, especially the characters! looks like you pondered on them quite a bit 👀
M is certainly going to be a challenge but one our MC is equipped for 😌 M (and W) will get their POV scenes in the next chapter! i wanted to hold them both off in this update since they were both doing some other things at the moment.
Which is only a compliment to you, really~ Rest assured: I don't spend time on things that don't properly intrigue me. I even replayed scenes (which is like - Highest praise from me lol). But it was really fun going through all the options to discover more on these lovely ROs. V, especially, I think, will be one to watch given they had the most - - Interesting intro, by far - but now seem 'normal' and sweet.
Ah - our busy RA, always so busy~ I don't worry on my MC winning M's heart; not after seeing their chemistry (gold); and I feel M doesn't (genuine)laugh and (real)smile for just anyone. (I could write a thesis on their lil impromptu philosophy date....) So looking forward to getting inside college Yoda's head next chap. <3
Ha salido ya¿?
la historia aún se está escribiendo. he estado muy ocupado con la escuela de derecho, así que el progreso es un poco lento. el nuevo capítulo tendrá más de 100k palabras, así que también será muy largo para compensar la espera!
Love Cedric n Wilhelm ❤️
Agreeing with all my heart
dad feeling rizzy 😭
Los comentarios me confundieron un monton "super short" no es algo que utilizaria para describir la calidad de narracion e increibles personajes que tienes aqui.
usualmente suelo escoger juego más de fantasía pero hay algo en como describes todo que le da un toque mágico incluso al dormitorio. No puedo mentir y realmente amo la historia y lo que sea que estés pensando con ella!
Me encanta!!!
Jajajaja como detalle extra como alguien que sufre de hemorragias en la nariz de manera diaria. Sólo podía leer esta parte entendiendo la frustración del MC.
ah, muchas gracias 😭 mientras escribía la actualización y publicaba dos capítulos a la vez, esperaba que fuera lo suficientemente largo para que todos quedaran satisfechos con su extensión y el contenido.
comentarios como el tuyo son tan agradables de leer porque la gente lo encontró lo suficientemente satisfactorio y me anima a escribir más. muchas gracias por tu apoyo, querido lector!
p.d. espero que los sangrados de nariz no te molesten mucho 😔
That moment when you find the perfect IF but it's super short
The same thing happened to me
Pues estaré esperando el nuevo capítulo con ganas... Por favor, seguid haciéndolo que vale mucho la pena. Gracias, un saludo desde España:)
Holaaa, que tal? Me encanto este libro!!! Para cuando mas capitulos? Porfaa, que tengo mucha intriga!!! Gracias:)
¡qué alegría saber que te gusta la historia hasta ahora! estoy escribiendo el próximo capítulo en este momento y será publicado a principios de 2025.
Please come out now!!!
sorry but i am curious what is the name of the song that's playing when you start the game
amber waves by ethel cain
thank you!
There aren't many stories that make me think about them for a few days, but this one was it. This, in specific, played with my mind and emotions to the point it make me come back to it to think.
Keep up the great work, I would love to see more of this.
this wip is so skibidi gyatt sigma rizz
(i think i died a little inside while typing that)
Wow.. great demo so far, can't wait for more.
I was going to stay away from D, but then I saw that you put Lorenzo Zurzolo as his 'aesthetic' and I was hooked. Well done, you've pulled me down the 'bad idea' angsty path.
Holy ****... I am INVESTED!!! The game relate to me sooo much! The detail in everything is just so PERFECT!!! I mean wow... even the detail in the drink? The different flavor for Red Bull??? I NEED MORE!!!
Need. More. Im obsessed.
THIS IS SO GOOD WHAAATTTTT
Oh damn I went into this so sure I'd be friends with everyone and romancing my childhood friend but why is my roommate so babygirl, my academic rival so fun to tease, and my RA so enchanting 😭😭😭 i don't think i can manslut, malewife, manipulate my way outta this
REAL HAAHHAHAHA
twas a great idea to hide the childhood friend from us for now, gets us invested in the others
That's a galaxy brain move right there
Hi, I love this story so much! Just want to know is there only one chapter - if not how do I continue to chapter 2? (after C leaves you on the dance floor)
that should be the end of chapter 3 actually!
HELPP I KEEP GETTING STUCK AFTER M GETS WHISKED AWAY AT THE CLUB FAIR 😭😭 the game refuses to get going its just stuck at "toward-' is this a bug? ☹☹
it's probably because you're playing with a save. many variables have been added/changed so you should start a new game!
Wheres the go to the police option for when you meet Vanessa (i chose female). "You just tried to murder me, but water under the bridge."
there is none, let’s just say M made sure of that lmao (also for plot reasons).
hey so this is actually great :) adore your writing style!
just want to gushed over how much i love the new chapter especially mc interaction with ro are splendid and making me giddy, i juat love the way you write the dialogue for mc and c rivalry it feel so genuine? Like it just feel like two smart rich people bickering over the smartness. Want to leave like a comment on your post about the ro future career that's on tumblr but couldn't cause my account can't give comment, like it's so annoying
Hey ! I really like your story ! I was here for W but I stayed C haha
I just wanted to say that when I choose 'Non binary', C and the father call the MC 'son' (even if I use they/them), is it normal ?
you might’ve missed the option to choose that term in the first page of chapter one. you should be able to cycle through the highlighted term there.
I might just be a smidge obsessed with C's character. Their dynamic with the MC is just *chef's kiss*.
can't apply for the major i want IRL so this will have to do 😋
I love this game so far! Can't wait for the rest of this blessed game to come out! However, does anyone know where W is?
you'll need to go to the party with D to find them. they’re the blonde in a RE4 costume.
i love you
This is so amazing. It feels really modern, it was really fun seeing these brain rot terms, I love it! Story is 😘. And oh, I like how Cedric is acting towards us deep down. Anyway, so excited for the next update, keep up the amazing work!!
It would be great if the MC refrained from making dumbass jokes without the player's input.
they were raised by elias, what did you expect 😞
I loved the impromptu dumbass jokes, dear author, ignore the haters!
Haters gonna hate
Ugghhh how is the writing so ggoooooodddd 😭I want more already! Thank you for feeding us well with 2 whole chapters!
Your use of brainrot is so skibidi alpha rizz... Your writing is a level ten gyatt in ohio (I'm so sorry 😭 The minute I read the brainrot from the father I had to say something)
I snorted, level ten gyatt in ohio indeed.
Hey will there be an option to add middle name(s) to mc's full name? It just seems kinda odd for them to not have one while all the other characters in the story do. (Don't get me wrong the game is terrific :) I'm enjoying it so much)
oh yeah, definitely. the option will show up on chapter two.
The part where they listen to the downtown lights, i played the song in the background as i was reading and it changed everything, it is so good 🥹 i cried a little imagining the scene of the parents dancing together to the song. Your writing is so good i can't wait for moreeee
did u learn brainrot terms just for this or do you have prolonged exposure like i do? either way the whole thing's very sigma alpha.
as a chronically online gen z kid, it was inevitable 😔
DEAR GOD I've never seen an IF that resonated with me as quickly as this one did, AND THEN I FIND OUT IT'S JUST THE PROLOGUE AHHHHHH
Please for the sake of my soul continue writing this, I NEEED ITTTT
the next update includes chapter two and three 🤭 it'll be released around the last week of october or early november 🫡
You are a saint, thank you for this blessing
omg so excited this was such an amazing read
Really excited!!!
The manor staff fears him.
The him in question about to be the most girly pop, man whore of this generation
comment of the month right here 😭
Basing him off of the God Dionysus. So yeah he's a cunty girly pop man whore but he's also a god of chaos, revelry, dead and rebirth, and madness. Fearing him is right. He is Mansplain, manipulate, man whore, male wife.
this. this is it. my all time favourite IF.
i can feel it in my bones.